Second Mock up Book

My Second mock up book showed the layout in more detail. I changed the format to A4, as the previous mock up didn't work. I also included the fold out section and concertina pages.

 I worked on the explosion scene, using a mushroom cloud, however, once I had finished it, I was not pleased with the result. I thought maybe it was a little too cliched.

 I spoke to Pete about it and he felt that I had cut the sotry down too short in comaprison with the amount of images I have made, and also, that the A4 format was possibly not the best approach.




We disscussed making it a large square shape, and how it would probably look more impressive. I will have to think about and re-size my fold out pages, as a square will make them completely different.

Explosion fold out

Explosion fold out