Tutorial Ceri

Today we discussed a lot about my project. In short, there were a few points raised that need to be changed;


Remove back ground paintings
Use only collage
Make the scenes darker
Use more of my painted textures
Change the mechanical parts in the figures
Crop more into the figures
Change how I have proposed to set the text
Find a real typewrite instead of using a font
Shorten the story and text.

Right now I am pretty stressed. I know it's not the case, but it feels like I have to change everything I have worked on. I am sure the points raised will improve the overall look of the book, and on some I completely agree. But it is hard to take it all in, I hope I get it right this time round.